In relation to the content, you have done a complete comparison with an introduction + similaritites + opinion. You could have expanded a little bit more on the differences. In relation to the use of the language, there are some grammatical mistakes and some problems in the order of the sentences but they don't interfere the message. You have to improve a little bit the utterance and pronunciation.
In relation to the content, you have done a complete comparison with an introduction + similaritites + opinion. You could have expanded a little bit more on the differences.
ResponEliminaIn relation to the use of the language, there are some grammatical mistakes and some problems in the order of the sentences but they don't interfere the message.
You have to improve a little bit the utterance and pronunciation.